For writing we have been learning about narrative I have to try to use and verbs adjectives and interesting language .Here is my work.
I am a Year 5 student in Team Moana at Ohaeawai School in Northland, New Zealand.
Thursday, 11 November 2021
Snapshot - The Man and the Gorill
Last week we had to write about a picture and on that picture there is a giant gorilla and man and his dog. We had to include verbs, adverbs and so on. Here is my work
Friday, 17 September 2021
Friday, 27 August 2021
metamorphosis
Yet another thing we did for writing this week was to imagine that we had undergone metamorphosis.
We had to pretend we had woken up one morning and discovered we had changed. It would be like going to sleep as a caterpillar and waking up as a butterfly. We had to write about what our new body was like and what we could do. I chose to turn into a hummingbird
Here is my work.
Sadness
This week one thing we did for writing was a Come to Your Senses Poem. First you had to think of a human emotion, like love. Then you had to say what colour it would be. Then, you had to write 5 more sentences using your 5 senses saying how each would relate to love. The emotion I chose was Sadness
Here is my work.
Wednesday, 7 July 2021
weather
Today we wrote a piece of writing about the weather. We got to choose whatever type we wanted. I chose to write about summer.
Wednesday, 30 June 2021
Mrs C, retired
In Week 8, Term 2 our school librarian, Mrs C, retired. On her last day, we put on a Book Character Parade. We dressed up in costumes like book characters and then we went on a parade through the Daycare Centre next to the school, past the shops in the village, along Hobson St and back upTennyson St to the school.
I chose to dress up as piggie
Wednesday, 23 June 2021
Flax & Matariki star
For the past week we have been learning about personification. I wrote about Flax & Matariki stars. Here is my work
Thursday, 10 June 2021
Similes poem about me
In Week 5, we learned how to write a Simile poem. This kind of poem needs a simile in almost every line. We could base it on any topic we wanted. I chose to base mine on me. Here is my work
Autunn Leaves
In Week 4, we went on a hunt in the playground to see if we could find some autumn leaves. We looked for them on trees and on the ground. Then we came back to class and wrote about them using as many of our senses as we could. Here is my work:
Friday, 21 May 2021
Feathers
This week we went on a hunt in the playground to see if we could find some feathers. We didn’t find any but luckily our teachers had collected some so then we came back to class and wrote about them using our senses of sight and touch to describe them. Here is my work:
Tuesday, 18 May 2021
Repetition poem
This week we had to write a repetition poem about what we didn’t do in the holidays. Here is my work. I hope you like it!
Thursday, 1 April 2021
Cicada Life cycle
The goal of this writing activity was to tell the step-by-step life cycle of a cicada. We had to remember to use sequencing adverbs at the beginning of each step/paragraph.
Tuesday, 9 March 2021
Couplet poem
Hi bloggers, we have used opposite adjectives to write a couplet poem. here is my poem. can you find my opposite adjectives ?
Thursday, 18 February 2021
Ohaeawai School values
Miss F was sad because we were not following our school values so we had to write how we could be them.
Wednesday, 17 February 2021
Monday, 7 December 2020
Catching the Sun
We have been learning about narrative writing. I rewrote a story called Catching the Sun. Here is my story.
Wednesday, 28 October 2020
Grandparents Writing
We have been learning to use descriptive language in our writing . We wrote about our for grands and grands day
Thursday, 24 September 2020
Creating a game
This week to end our procedure writing topic we have been creating our own game. I made a board game. My theme was lake.
Thursday, 10 September 2020
Procedure writing
We have been learning to writing a procedure. I know a procedure has to have a title, materials and a goal. My steps have to make sense and be in order.