This week one thing we did for writing was a Come to Your Senses Poem. First you had to think of a human emotion, like love. Then you had to say what colour it would be. Then, you had to write 5 more sentences using your 5 senses saying how each would relate to love. The emotion I chose was Sadness
Here is my work.
Tino pai on your awesome poem about sadness Stella. I really like how you have made some very clever comparisions using all 5 senses to help describe sadness. I wonder how you would describe happiness? That should be easy for you, you are such a happy, helpful person.
ReplyDeleteHi Stella, You have described sadness so well...I do like how you sadi it looks like rain falling and then followed by the sound of crying. a great way to tie in your thoughts. It would be fun to try others...surprise, fear, happy... a great way to think of these emotions. Grandma x
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