I am a Year 5 student in Team Moana at Ohaeawai School in Northland, New Zealand.
What a lovely piece of writing Stella. You did a great job with rhyming the ends of you lines. I am really glad I don't live in the city too.
I love your poem because you used rhyming words and such descriptive words. This reminds of playing in the leaves and seeing all the beautiful colour leaves on the ground. I love your picture too.
What a lovely piece of writing Stella. You did a great job with rhyming the ends of you lines. I am really glad I don't live in the city too.
ReplyDeleteI love your poem because you used rhyming words and such descriptive words. This reminds of playing in the leaves and seeing all the beautiful colour leaves on the ground. I love your picture too.
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